Waukesha student wins 
Titanic poetry contest
Images of sinking ship inspire Heyer Elementary sixth-grader

By JOE PETRIE - GM Today Staff

March 5, 2009


Heyer Elementary School sixth-grade student Trevor Monasterio, left, reads a poem to the school’s student body while Principal Gregg Deets holds a microphone for him Wednesday at the school. Trevor’s poem, "The Sounds of Her Death," was selected by the Milwaukee Public Museum as the best poem from roughly 150 student submissions that were written about the Titanic.


WAUKESHA - Heyer Elementary School sixth-grader Trevor Monasterio doesn’t consider himself much of a writer, but he does love history.

However, when he saw the Titanic exhibit at the Milwaukee Public Museum, he found his muse and unleashed his hidden poetry talents.

"It’s amazing to think about all the people who died there and to see the artifacts they brought up from the ship," he said. "And you could feel the iceberg and find out if you lived or died on the ship, and it was just an amazing thing."


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Monasterio’s fascination with the exhibit and the tale of the Titanic is now being recognized by the museum after he turned his thoughts into a poem that was voted the best in the area.

After they visited the exhibit, his teacher Sara Gagnon had her students participate in a poetry contest where they wrote two poems about the Titanic.

Monasterio decided to take an onomatopoeia approach to his poem, titled "The Sounds of Her Death," using words that describe noises of the ship sinking.

He said he spent several late nights during the week the poems were due trying to figure out how to present the Titanic tragedy in his own words, but in the end he wanted to present it in a way that captured the essence of the events.

"I have all these different noises in my head and it’s like a jungle in my head," he said. "When I use (the onomatopoeia) approach it gives me a chance to put these noises and the jungle down on paper."

The poem beat out more than 150 submissions from across the metro Milwaukee area and will be published in the organization’s magazine. Monasterio will also get to read his poem at a special awards ceremony May 18 as part of the International Museum Day festivities.

Gagnon said she was very excited to see one of her students win and show off his talents.

"I’m just so proud that he won. He had such beautiful word choices in it and I was taken aback," she said. "He has gotten an experience in the sixth grade that he’ll probably remember for the rest of his life."

Although his poem has won an award, Monasterio said he hasn’t felt more of an urge to write in his spare time. But, he has gained more confidence.

"If I put my mind to something I can do it," he said. "If you be yourself, you can succeed."

"The Sounds of Her Death"

Screeech the ice slices open the belly of the ship

Officers strike the emergency bell: ding, ding, ding

Clomp, clomp, clomp, worried footsteps slap against the deck

Whoosh, icy water hurries in

Bbbbbeepbbbbeeeep the Titanic radios for help

Keerpbooom! Emergency flares fly off

Splash! Lifeboats are lowered

Screams echo in the air

Women and children first, get in, get in, get in!

Waaaa! Waaaa! Children cry for help.

Shhhhhhhizzzzz-the lights go out

Tick, tick, tick the grandfather clock counts the hour

Splat, splat, splat, the oars dig into the water

Boom!!! The Titanic gives one more deafening boom

And plummets into the mysterious deep.

- Trevor Monasterio

E-mail: jpetrie@conleynet.com


This story appeared in The Freeman on March 5, 2009.