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First Stage Theater's 'To the Promised Land' worthy of thought, but script needs work

By JULIE McHALE - TimeOut Theater Critic

January 31, 2012

 

MILWAUKEE - First Stage Children’s Theater’s present production, “To the Promised Land,” was written by a Milwaukee native. The play tries to unite two teenagers, one black and one Jewish, in their similar struggles to improve their lot in life.

Jonathan Gillard Daly attempted to link two characters who lived 50 years apart in the same neighborhood to their common dream of standing up for themselves and their oppressed people. Golda Meir is the Jewish girl;  Ruth, the fictional young black. Meir’s family has emigrated from Russia; Ruth’s from Alabama.

Both characters are inspired by others who have tried to change themselves and their environments. Meir by her older sister Sheyna, and Ruth by her dead brother Cliff, who was killed during the racial turbulence in Milwaukee in 1969, and by Mr. Baker, her teacher who takes a personal interest in her.

Although the themes inherent in the piece are laudatory, the script is fragmented, and the two main characters, Goldie and Ruth, are not developed enough to make us care about them. Actually, we end up caring more about Cliff and Florence, Ruth’s brother and her hardworking mother.

There are too many instances in the story that push the limits of credulity - when Florence shows Ruth a photo of her father, one that has been in plain sight for years; that Ruth never asked about her father until she was a teenager; that Florence could be so caring and responsible and yet so negligent, so unaware of her only child’s issues, especially after already losing a child; that Goldie could so easily run away from home at 14, that a middle-school teacher would have time to deliver assignments to every truant student’s home. These are just a few examples of occurrences that didn’t ring true. Sufficient motivation for many actions was lacking.

The most compelling positives in the production are the performances of Marvette Knight and Di’Monte Henning in their roles as Ruth’s mother and dead brother. Lonnae Hickman as Ruth showed signs of life as the play progressed, and Katherine Pollnow was inspired in her role as Goldie. Raeleen McMillion gave some oomph to her cameo role as Goldie’s mother.

The grand ending almost compensated for the somewhat lackluster quality of the script. The costume alone held our attention, and coupled with the dramatic flourishes of the speaker, made the ending more memorable than what preceded it.

This play could definitely provoke some lively discussions with students as they ponder their present situation and what they might do to improve it. “To the Promised Land” is a worthy effort, but it needs some work before reaching its lofty goal. Knowing Daly, he’ll probably achieve it.

Rachel Finn’s set design was impressive, but if this was the house that both families lived in 50 years apart, then both families should have used the whole house, but that’s a blocking problem.

Directed by Sheri Williams Pannel, ‘To the Promised Land’ runs through Feb. 10 in the Todd Wehr Theater at the Marcus Center for the Performing Arts, 158 N. Water St., Milwaukee. For show times and tickets, call 414-273-7206 or visit www.firststage.org.